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Lunario sentimental

overview

One of my favorite books, a lecture by Jorge Luis Borges on writing, cites a Leopoldo Lugones work for which I can find no English translation.

“The Argentine poet Lugones, way back in the year 1909, wrote that he thought poets were always using the same metaphors, and that he would try his hand at discovering new metaphors for the moon. And in fact he concocted many hundreds of them. He also said, in the foreword to a book called Lunario sentimental, that every word is a dead metaphor.”

Borges, This Craft of Verse, p. 22 (The Metaphor)

I am intrigued! Let’s get a translation out in the world.

timeline

24 December 2024
we're up to page 71 in translation work
25 December 2024
poetry typesetting template complete
01 January 2025
we're up to page 201 in translation work
06 January 2025
we're finished with initial translation work
7 January 2025
typesetting all poetry begins
13 January 2025
the poetry typesetting is progressing well, about 50%, and I've developed a typesetting method for the plays, which was something of a task, since the dramatist package does not get along well with XeLaTeX inside of a book document type
14 January 2025
poetry typesetting complete
15 January 2025
prose typesetting complete

original

The original work was published in 1909, and has since entered the public domain. You can download it here.

The work contains 37 pieces:

an index of 37 pieces of prose, poetry and plays in Lunario Sentimental

translation

Spanish to English translation was done by Oskarina Perez. I hired her for her familiarity with the genre and the author.

I did English editing work, in consultation with Oskarina.

typesetting

I typeset the work in XeLaTeX, to provide modern font support.

body font

EB Garamond was chosen for its wide character support and, well, because it’s beautiful.

Since this stuff matters, here’s how I’ve configured EB Garamond in fontspec:

\setmainfont{EB Garamond}
    [
        UprightFont = EB Garamond Regular,
        ItalicFont = EB Garamond Italic,
        BoldFont = EB Garamond Bold,
        Ligatures = Common,
        StylisticSet = 6,
        Numbers = Proportional,
        Numbers = OldStyle
    ]

I wanted very much to set Ligatures = Rare because it looks awesome, but I can’t justify it ergonomically for the readers I suspect will want this book. Some day maybe, on another less modern work. Here’s Rare:

lots of rare st ligatures

You can’t say these common ones aren’t sick though, still. Here’s Common:

a sick ligature on a Q

title font

HFF High Tension was chosen for the title font. It has a very simple character set, so we can’t really use it outside titles.

LUNARIO SENTIMENTAL in High Tension font.

poetry

The poetry is set using the poetry package. There’s really no trick to this, a poem looks as follows in the code,

\poemlinenumsfalse
\centerpoemoff
\begin{poem}
\textit{Che cotesta córtese opinione} \\
\textit{Ti fian chiavata in mezzo della testa.} \\!
\end{poem}

plays

Plays were a bigger deal. I like the dramatist package a lot, but it doesn’t work inside a book document type in XeLaTeX. So I made my own environment to format the plays, headers, and dramatis personae sections. Here’s what it looks like in the preamble:

% Play environment with acts and scenes
\newenvironment{play}[1]{
    \section*{#1} % Title of the play
    \setlength{\parindent}{0pt} % No indentation
    \setlength{\parskip}{1em} % Space between paragraphs
}{
    \setlength{\parindent}{1em} % Restore default indentation
    \setlength{\parskip}{0pt} % Restore default spacing
}

% Commands for structured formatting of plays
\newcommand{\act}[1]{%
    \bigskip
    \centerline{\textsc{\Large\textbf{Act #1}}} % Large centered act header
    \bigskip
}
\newcommand{\scene}[1]{%
    \bigskip
    \centerline{\textsc{Scene #1}} % Centered small caps scene header
    \medskip
}
\newcommand{\character}[1]{%
    \textbf{#1.---}\hspace{1em} % Character names with em dash
}
\newcommand{\stage}[1]{%
    \textit{(#1)} % Italics for stage directions
}

% Dramatis Personae Environment
\newenvironment{dramatispersonae}{
    \medskip
    \centerline{\textsc{Dramatis Personae:}} % Centered small caps title
    \medskip
    \begin{list}{}{
        \setlength{\labelwidth}{3cm}  % Adjust label width
        \setlength{\leftmargin}{3.5cm} % Adjust left margin
        \setlength{\labelsep}{0.5em}   % Spacing between label and text
        \setlength{\itemsep}{0.5em}    % Space between items
    }
}{
    \end{list}
}

% Character listing command
\newcommand{\characterline}[2]{%
    \item[\textit{#1,}] #2 % Add \item for each character entry
}

And here’s what a play looks like in code:

\begin{play}{ }

\begin{dramatispersonae}
    \characterline{Dalinda}{23 years old, blonde. Sister of Jacinto.}
    \characterline{Jacinto}{26 years old. Brother of Dalinda.}
    \characterline{Reinaldo}{20 years old. Friend of Jacinto and Dalinda's fiancé.}
\end{dramatispersonae}

\act{I}

\scene{1}

\character{Jacinto} This is an example dialogue line. This is an example dialogue line. This is an example dialogue line. This is an example dialogue line. This is an example dialogue line. This is an example dialogue line. This is an example dialogue line. This is an example dialogue line. This is an example dialogue line. This is an example dialogue line. This is an example dialogue line. This is an example dialogue line.

\character{Reinaldo} \stage{Turning to Jacinto} This is another example. This is another example. This is another example. This is another example. This is another example. This is another example. This is another example. This is another example. This is another example. This is another example. This is another example.

\scene{2}
\stage{It's really dark and foggy, the ground is on fire here and there.}

\character{Jacinto} says something else

\character{Reinaldo} indeed, another line

\character{Dalinda} \stage{Karate kicking Reinaldo}

This ends up looking as follows when compiled:

The first page of a play to illustrate compiled formatting.

publication

TBD (almost certainly on demand, but I’m looking for a decent quality service.)

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